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"A good style should show no signs of effort. What is written should seem a happy accident." W. Somerset Maugham
The key point of this quote is the word ’seem’ which means that those
‘happy accidents’ are thoroughly prepared. Inaccurate spelling here, a
missed punctuation mark there – and things can turn into a ’serious’ or
even ‘fatal’ accident for your copy. I’m not going to say that WHAT you
write is less important than HOW you do it, but repeated stylistic
mistakes can divert all of your prospects, unless they are completely
illiterate themselves or blind (the latest survey showed they weren’t).
Tame your style before it starts ‘biting’ your income. Enhance your copy in 10 easy steps:
1. Ampersand (&)
Though
‘and’ and ‘&’ stand for the same thing, you shouldn’t abuse the
latter. Follow the rule: the ampersand sign is used for trade names and
radio station frequencies.
* Dolce & Gabanna * JSM Radio 93.2 & 108.1 FM, 1005 & 1284 AM * Franny and Zooey by JD Salinger
2. Contact Details
Be
precise. Such introductions as "Bond. James Bond" went out of fashion
about thirty years ago. Scrupulous web users want to know where exactly
they can find your amazing products, services or whatever you offer
them. So, disclose all these step by step:
* Name; * Postal
address (addressee’s name, company, building name, number and street
name, town, country and postcode). Separate it by starting a new line
or by putting a comma; * Telephone number (dialing codes are given in
one block, without brackets); * Fax number; * Email; * Website (give
the shortest URL possible and make sure it works by loading it in a web
browser. Omit ‘www’ in unclickable URLs but use it in links)
3. Foreign Words and Characters
If
a word or phrase aren’t generally accepted in the language, you should
use italics. ‘Generally accepted’ means they have become a part of
English. Consult with the dictionary, if necessary. Make sure foreign
symbols are identified correctly: readers are unlikely to guess that
‘aa,ii eona oi?ioi’ stands for:
* clientele (this French word is now a part of the English language) * si vales bene est ego valeo (a Latin phrase)
4. Italics
Apart
from foreign words, italics are used for titles of TV and radio
programs, books, albums or songs, plays, paintings, newspapers,
magazines etc (yes, that is etc, not etc). Italicize ‘the’ when it is
on the masthead:
* The Economist * Monet’s Poppies Blooming * Eminem’s Encore
5. Lists
The
most critical thing with lists is to keep parallelism. Don’t jump from
one grammatic structure to another, for example, don’t write like this
To make finger-licking cookies we need:
* 2 tbs cinnamon * 0.5 kg sugar * 1 cup flour * to add 4 eggs * to heat the oven * kneading dough
Even
if your grandma had known of this delicious meal from Queen of England,
that’s a fat chance your prospects appreciate the recipe: it looks
absolutely illiterate.
* Instead, write:
To make finger-licking cookies we need:
* 2 tbs cinnamon * 0.5 kg sugar * 1 cup flour * 4 eggs * a well-heated oven * kneaded dough
Or just list all ingredients and after that describe the cooking process: "Heat the oven well. Knead the dough."
6. Money
Write the names of currencies in lower case, adding two digits after the symbol if it isn’t round:
* 300.75 pounds * 50 dollars
Hold
down Ctrl+Alt+E to insert the euro symbol in Word. If you mention sums
of million and billion throughout the text, it is better to abbreviate
them, without leaving a space:
* $34 billion – $34bn
7. Numbers
Basically
numbers from one to nine are written in words, as well as any numbers
put at the beginning of a sentence and approximate ones. Don’t forget
about the comma in numbers from 1,000 upwards:
* Three Men in a
Boat was published in 1889. * Today the company’s turnover equals to
$500,000 yearly. * Usually we eat little for dessert – about four or
five chocolate bars and coffee with cream.
8. Time
If you
use the 12-hour clock, the hour and minutes are separated by a full
stop. As ‘am’ and ‘pm’ refer to ‘before noon’ and ‘afternoon’, it is
useless to write ‘12am’. Have the 24-hour clock? Separate the hours and
minutes by a colon:
* 22:45 * 7am * 12midnight, or just midnight * between 8am and 14pm.
9. Titles and Honors
When
a widely respected person is mentioned for the first time, you should
give his/her title in full. Starting from the second time in text, you
can write only a shortened version:
* His Majesty King Lear – The King
10. Weight and Measures
Make sure you chose the proper – upper or lower – case:
* MHz (megahertz) * MB (megabyte) * km (kilometer)
Don’t
overuse imperial measurements, giving more preference to standardized
metric or at least giving the equivalent in brackets:
* 22kg (48.502 pounds)
Summing
up all the above… You know, sometimes the difference between literacy
and tedium is very subtle, so whatever you have just read in this
guideline, try to keep it within your own style.
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